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kaylynn
kaylynn Commaful Star Awkward writer girl

Inner Beast

She is sweet as sin, but sour for the soul.
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caffeinated
caffeinated Silver Comma a lot on my mind

Alright

nothing's alright
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bruvton
bruvton Commaful Star Ice cream 🅱️ike gang

What's Missing?

Why am I so ungrateful?
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

You set everything on fire but i didn't aim for ?

You set everything on fire but i didn't aim for ?
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

You look alive but not safe.

You look alive but not safe.
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missindiepoet
missindiepoet a writer i guess :)

sweet and sour

how could a strawberry love a lemon?
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

I'm so near to free from depression but i can't

I'm so near to free from depression but i can't
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

I throw a thing but it didn't reach,

I throw a thing but it didn't reach,
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soprano
soprano Silver Comma frog enthusiast

sweet light

*edited* this is fictional! i'm actually pretty lonely irl! but i really wanted to write this so here it is.
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

The thinks used to stop me now , I'm on the another side of it,now, It stop me to move back,

The thinks used to stop me now , I'm on the another side of it,now, It stop me to move back,
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

I feel pain when I breathing.

I feel pain when I breathing.
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

I thought there was a wall but i realised i see your back

I thought there was a wall but i realised i see your back.
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

A light which used to embrace my beauty now it's harsh my skin with insensibility,

A light which used to embrace my beauty now it's harsh my skin with insensibility,
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atul
atul love my posts,at least look at them.

The dream which i perching now the dream find anyone else to done this.

The dream which i perching now the dream find anyone else to done this.
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florence
florence Community member

Shunned

i shunned myself and it’s still happening.
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