𝐆𝐡𝐚𝐳𝐚𝐥 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐬𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐡𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐬𝐲𝐥𝐥𝐚𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐬; 𝐢𝐧𝐬𝐩𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐞 ‘𝐑𝐞𝐛𝐞𝐥 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐒𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐬’ 𝐰𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐧 𝐛𝐲 𝐀𝐥𝐰𝐲𝐧 𝐇𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐭𝐨𝐧.
“𝙸 𝚏𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚏�...
A second attempt at ghazal. It is a challenging form to write. Thank you @pattersonbear for telling me about this.
𝘈 𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘻𝘢𝘭 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘈𝘧𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯.
𝘈 𝘥𝘦𝘥𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘈𝘧𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘸𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘯. 𝘞𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘯 𝘢𝘧𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘨...
This is my very first attempt at Ghazal poetry. Let me know how it is😊
We started work on it about 6 months ago. Hope you like it. 💕
CoMixed from @priktasrivastav: https://commaful.com/play/priktasrivastav/an-aspiration-a-pikku-and-summer-collab/
Third attempt at ghazal. A light, airy piece. (look up ghazal and give it a try)
An experiment with a new form: Ghazal. There are very specific, very rigid rules. Thank you, @pattersonbear for the tip.
An exercise in Ghazal form. Give it a try! Brief tutorial at the end.
There was a great distance, Of land and sea between you and me, a worldly dissonance. Mountains and deserts, I would have traversed. Though the visa declared that it remained, that god awful distance...
A Ghazal on hope and self appreciation in order to defeat depression and to invoke strength in the face of life's challenges. It took me agers to make hope you like it folks. Merry Christmas!
My own poem I made, which is one of 2-3 poems made for a kinda competition. More updated than when I passed the first stage (first three rounds).
A poem inspired by the Ghazal style about the ”Roots” of words, people, and plants.
अपनी क़िस्मत को फिर बदल कर देखते हैं
आओ मुहब्बत को एक बार संभल कर देखते हैं
चाँद तारे फूल शबनम सब रखते हैं एक तरफ
महबूब-ए-नज़र पे इस बार मर कर देखते हैं
जिस्म की भूख तो रोज कई घर उजाड़ देती है
हम रूह...
𝐆𝐡𝐚𝐳𝐚𝐥 𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐩𝐨𝐬𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐡𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐬𝐲𝐥𝐥𝐚𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐬; 𝐢𝐧𝐬𝐩𝐢𝐫𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐞 ‘𝐑𝐞𝐛𝐞𝐥 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐒𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐬’ 𝐰𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐧 𝐛𝐲 𝐀𝐥𝐰𝐲𝐧 𝐇𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐭𝐨𝐧.
“𝙸 𝚏𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚏�...
A second attempt at ghazal. It is a challenging form to write. Thank you @pattersonbear for telling me about this.
𝘈 𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘻𝘢𝘭 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘣𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘳𝘦𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘈𝘧𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯.
𝘈 𝘥𝘦𝘥𝘪𝘤𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘈𝘧𝘨𝘩𝘢𝘯 𝘸𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘯. 𝘞𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘯 𝘢𝘧𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘨...
This is my very first attempt at Ghazal poetry. Let me know how it is😊
We started work on it about 6 months ago. Hope you like it. 💕
CoMixed from @priktasrivastav: https://commaful.com/play/priktasrivastav/an-aspiration-a-pikku-and-summer-collab/
Third attempt at ghazal. A light, airy piece. (look up ghazal and give it a try)
An experiment with a new form: Ghazal. There are very specific, very rigid rules. Thank you, @pattersonbear for the tip.
An exercise in Ghazal form. Give it a try! Brief tutorial at the end.
There was a great distance, Of land and sea between you and me, a worldly dissonance. Mountains and deserts, I would have traversed. Though the visa declared that it remained, that god awful distance...
A Ghazal on hope and self appreciation in order to defeat depression and to invoke strength in the face of life's challenges. It took me agers to make hope you like it folks. Merry Christmas!
My own poem I made, which is one of 2-3 poems made for a kinda competition. More updated than when I passed the first stage (first three rounds).
A poem inspired by the Ghazal style about the ”Roots” of words, people, and plants.
अपनी क़िस्मत को फिर बदल कर देखते हैं
आओ मुहब्बत को एक बार संभल कर देखते हैं
चाँद तारे फूल शबनम सब रखते हैं एक तरफ
महबूब-ए-नज़र पे इस बार मर कर देखते हैं
जिस्म की भूख तो रोज कई घर उजाड़ देती है
हम रूह...