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madman
madman Where, What, When, Who, Why, How?

Fuck

Well fuck i'm just shit out of luck, with all this progression what's up with this depression. It just seems like regression,

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jessie_yessie
jessie_yessie Beggining Writer Lookin for Feedback :^)

Dilapidated

Sort of long, but a poem about emotional abuse and the effects of it. Feedback is appreciated!

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jodiedavies
jodiedavies UC, New Zealand

Mum

The power of grief.

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herotheturtle
herotheturtle Bronze Comma Pretty words, sad stories.

Ten Minutes to Midnight

Rough draft of a story for my writing class. Feedback is greatly appreciated.

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laurenholder
laurenholder Community member

I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry

Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...

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glitterbug
glitterbug Passionate about poetry 💕

Prisoner

I don’t even know if this makes any sense but please comment feedback:)

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diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39 ☕️Coffee Bean☕️

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

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basharasweet
basharasweet Commabassador Twt: @bashofgreen

Feedback for Comma Relay 2018

ATTENTION please!! Comment your feedback for Comma Relay 2018!!

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meaningfulwords
meaningfulwords Community member

Oh, Sweet Ocean.

I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

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learner1907
learner1907 Community member

Up and Beyond

Up, beyond the veil of cloud and sky, Up, beyond the realm where birds dare not fly.

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madman
madman Where, What, When, Who, Why, How?

Emotions

How am I supposed to deal with all these emotions? Slowly coasting, costing me my sanity wishing for my mind to be at ease, all I seek is peace please. Whenever it rains I think of you the child I nev...

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diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39 ☕️Coffee Bean☕️

She Tries To Hard Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived

She Tries to Hard Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived

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diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39 ☕️Coffee Bean☕️

She Tries To Hard Chap. 1 Eager Artist

She Tries To Hard is going to be a little “book” of poems I’ve written. Please read and give me any type of feedback to help me grow! This first chapter is called “Eager Artist”

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glitterbug
glitterbug Passionate about poetry 💕

Doll

Behind the doll with ocean blue eyes with rosy pink cheeks... Fun fact: I took the pictures in the background

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madman
madman Where, What, When, Who, Why, How?

Trust me.

As you sit alone at home reviewing the calamity of insanity, over a conversation with yourself on the phone. It trips you up wondering if you should trust your own mind, telling yourself you'll be jus...

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hopeautumn
hopeautumn Community member

Deaf-Muted

Can’t say how I feel

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lovesdeanthomas
lovesdeanthomas Gifted Writer Part of the bts army and poetry is life,

Update

Feedback would be appreciated!!!

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negasenpai
negasenpai Lv.24 Depressed Arcane Storyteller

Feedback Request 1

Every now and then, I get super into doodling and if I really like the character I doodle I end up giving them little background details on the fly. I'm posting to see if this character interests anyo...

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emcakes0
emcakes0 Community member

Listen, Listen, Listen

Listen. feedback please :)

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diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39 ☕️Coffee Bean☕️

June

June was the month of friendship. July was the month of... ------ Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...

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