Short Stories featuring Critic

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goldenphoenix
goldenphoenix Commaful Star Pain demands to be felt.

Cynical Critic

Another poem, I guess.

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bernardtwindwil
bernardtwindwil Gold Comma Granddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com

Tears for tech

We have remakes and non-stop SFX and have lost our literacy

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philmichaelwebs
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer Just a metalcore lover.

Zest, more than lemon shavings

For the challenge about #zest. This was hard and a weird word to focus on. Hope you like it.

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rosarlei
rosarlei Commaful Star "Here, Play" ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ 🕷

Cast down the critic


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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Existence

We are vowed to the objectification ...

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

There is no me

Maybe there was never a "me" to begin with

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

As The Thought Of Not Thinking Hits Me ...

I see faceless people and meaningless objects, I see “my” reflection

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meaningfulwords
meaningfulwords Community member

Oh, Sweet Ocean.

I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Melancholic state of human (philo)

In our contemporary world the more a society is colourful, the more it's diving into an unseen gloominess

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

The Ignorant

In a society where people are praised for their “Parroty” rather than “Authenticity”… The “thought” is deserted.

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Perpetual Happiness DOESN'T EXIST ... nor Perpetual Melancholy!

What makes this life worth living it, is also what people fear the most.

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Reclaim Privacy!

“I am thinking of a special house with one more big layer of wall that looks like a cube. Like a big box ... Nobody can peak in” Kwon Ji-yong - Act III: Motto Documentary

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Untitled 6: Religion ... a rational categorisation?

The endless war between "over-categorisation" and "sameness" has driven humanity to its self-destruction ...Hello! A middle ground !!!!

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Untitled 8: Hey You! .... What kind of person am I?

Humans are complex ... It's hard for us to see the unseen side of one another, who they are, what they like, what they hate, what makes them happy, sad or hollow .... How all this can be relayed?

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Perfection

Humans are so obsessed with perfection that they see nothing but imperfection at every corner of their lives

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untitlelogy
untitlelogy Gifted Writer There is no me

Untited 9: Confessions of an academician

“We are all of us richer than we think we are, but we are taught to borrow and to beg, and brought up more to make use of what is another’s than of our own.” — Michel de Montaigne

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oscarmannpoetry
oscarmannpoetry Community member

Comfort Zone

Get out of my head With your great expectations

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