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Critic Short Stories

Here are the top Critic short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "mind", "idk what's wrong with me", and more.
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Cynical Critic
goldenphoenix Commaful Star
a year ago
235
1
13
Another poem, I guess.

Tears for tech
bernardtwindwil Gold Comma
4 years ago
89
2
8
We have remakes and non-stop SFX and have lost our literacy

Zest, more than lemonshavi...
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
3 years ago
65
0
11
For the challenge about #zest. This was hard and a weird word to focus on. Hope you like it.

Cast down the critic
rosarlei Commaful Star
2 years ago
90
0
4

Existence
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
31
0
0
We are vowed to the objectification ...

There is no me
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
30
0
4
Maybe there was never a "me" to begin with

As The Thought Of Not Thin...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
16
0
1
I see faceless people and meaningless objects, I see “my” reflection

Fuck The Human' Bipolar Un...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
17
0
2

Oh, Sweet Ocean.
meaningfulwords
5 years ago
14
1
6
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

Melancholic state of human...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
12
0
2
In our contemporary world the more a society is colourful, the more it's diving into an unseen gloominess

TheIgnorant
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
5
0
2
In a society where people are praised for their “Parroty” rather than “Authenticity”… The “thought” is deserted.

Love your mother, the most...
corthant
4 years ago
4
0
0

Perpetual Happiness DOESN'...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
15
0
2
What makes this life worth living it, is also what people fear the most.

Reclaim Privacy!
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
3
0
0
“I am thinking of a special house with one more big layer of wall that looks like a cube. Like a big box ... Nobody can peak in” Kwon Ji-yong - Act III: Motto Documentary

Untitled 6: Religion ... a...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
3
0
0
The endless war between "over-categorisation" and "sameness" has driven humanity to its self-destruction ...Hello! A middle ground !!!!

Mr Lewis is famed for the ...
foresting
4 years ago
2
0
0

Untitled 8: Hey You! .... ...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
4
0
0
Humans are complex ... It's hard for us to see the unseen side of one another, who they are, what they like, what they hate, what makes them happy, sad or hollow .... How all this can be relayed?

Perfection
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
2
0
0
Humans are so obsessed with perfection that they see nothing but imperfection at every corner of their lives

Untited 9: Confessions of ...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
2
0
0
“We are all of us richer than we think we are, but we are taught to borrow and to beg, and brought up more to make use of what is another’s than of our own.” — Michel de Montaigne

Comfort Zone
oscarmannpoetry
2 years ago
13
0
2
Get out of my head With your great expectations

Cynical Critic
goldenphoenix Commaful Star
a year ago
235
1
13
Another poem, I guess.

Tears for tech
bernardtwindwil Gold Comma
4 years ago
89
2
8
We have remakes and non-stop SFX and have lost our literacy

Zest, more than lemonshavi...
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
3 years ago
65
0
11
For the challenge about #zest. This was hard and a weird word to focus on. Hope you like it.

Cast down the critic
rosarlei Commaful Star
2 years ago
90
0
4

Existence
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
31
0
0
We are vowed to the objectification ...

There is no me
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
30
0
4
Maybe there was never a "me" to begin with

As The Thought Of Not Thin...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
16
0
1
I see faceless people and meaningless objects, I see “my” reflection

Fuck The Human' Bipolar Un...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
17
0
2

Oh, Sweet Ocean.
meaningfulwords
5 years ago
14
1
6
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

Melancholic state of human...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
12
0
2
In our contemporary world the more a society is colourful, the more it's diving into an unseen gloominess

TheIgnorant
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
5
0
2
In a society where people are praised for their “Parroty” rather than “Authenticity”… The “thought” is deserted.

Love your mother, the most...
corthant
4 years ago
4
0
0

Perpetual Happiness DOESN'...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
15
0
2
What makes this life worth living it, is also what people fear the most.

Reclaim Privacy!
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
3
0
0
“I am thinking of a special house with one more big layer of wall that looks like a cube. Like a big box ... Nobody can peak in” Kwon Ji-yong - Act III: Motto Documentary

Untitled 6: Religion ... a...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
3
0
0
The endless war between "over-categorisation" and "sameness" has driven humanity to its self-destruction ...Hello! A middle ground !!!!

Mr Lewis is famed for the ...
foresting
4 years ago
2
0
0

Untitled 8: Hey You! .... ...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
4
0
0
Humans are complex ... It's hard for us to see the unseen side of one another, who they are, what they like, what they hate, what makes them happy, sad or hollow .... How all this can be relayed?

Perfection
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
2
0
0
Humans are so obsessed with perfection that they see nothing but imperfection at every corner of their lives

Untited 9: Confessions of ...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
2 years ago
2
0
0
“We are all of us richer than we think we are, but we are taught to borrow and to beg, and brought up more to make use of what is another’s than of our own.” — Michel de Montaigne

Comfort Zone
oscarmannpoetry
2 years ago
13
0
2
Get out of my head With your great expectations