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wintermoontea
wintermoontea a bit dramatic, don’t you think?

Gone Under.

Gone Under // A short poem. - This is my first work on Commaful, I’m still messing around with it and getting a feel for the layout. Any advice regarding navigating my way around or how this all work...

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aj14
aj14 Bronze Comma I read. Therefore I Write.

Do not blame Love

Who’s to blame when everything fails in a relationship? (By the way, the pictures i used to my poems were snapped by me. Follow me on instagram @ajpapogilem 🙂

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aj14
aj14 Bronze Comma I read. Therefore I Write.

Why are you still awake?

Why are you still awake?

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littlestpurmaid
littlestpurmaid Community member

First post

FIRST

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hrejvia
hrejvia Community member

I who was

Feedback please. Constructive criticism please.

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dorky
dorky Aspiring writer!

A Runny Nose

Am I talking about my love life or another issue? You decide.

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breathefreely
breathefreely Books, Coffee and a rainy day

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Books are escape from the real world

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dorky
dorky Aspiring writer!

I'm confused

I'm confused

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breathefreely
breathefreely Books, Coffee and a rainy day

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Read books, ignore the world

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kristiannamonro
kristiannamonro Community member

Cerulean

Biplanes pass above my skull the sky humming makes the earth null.

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_kvlls_
_kvlls_ lover of all art

There are galaxies within me~

I'm a nerd with time on their hands. I would describe myself as the colors black, white, grey and a galaxy of colored specks. Each color depends on my mood. I love: My girlfriend, Ell 💞 Bands Dogs W...

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calthesadpoet
calthesadpoet Community member

I fell to the ground When you told me goodbye By: Cal The Sad Poet

After she said her goodbye I fell to the ground My knees scrapped and ruined My scars showing Everything I turned miserable Because of her Because of that one goodbye

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rihanbook
rihanbook Just a dreamer... 😁

The end...

My first short story... I'm not a native speaker of English, please correct my grammatical errors and please give me feedback of my short story...

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theg00dbean
theg00dbean Community member

A cute WLW bi girl story ~ my first attempt at writing tbh

His long, wavy hair looked like it was made out of silk. He tossed it over his shoulder, then looked up at her through his lashes, showing off a tiny grin; "What do you want?" he asked. Her heart flut...

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holliebanks
holliebanks Community member

Mould

Everything is so ugly.

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