Get to know the me behind the screen #11
I tried, so I really hope you enjoyed this! I know the killers POV isn't good but.. oh well!
2.1 Happy Birthday to Yukimura! Remember, I love you ALL my faithful Yams!
-Tsukkisaurus๐ฆ๐
Okay so this is my first one of my first poems ever so I apologise before hand if itโs not up to par, but I enjoyed it.
Lea met Chris on a party. If you want to call it that. To be honest, it was just a barbecue with a couple of friends. Chris lived next door and came over.
The sky is a cold gray. I couldnโt see a tiny piece of the blue sky I used to love so much.
The genie exited the lamp,
waving his arms about.
As the boat sailed far across the ocean Leaving back a lifeless trail
(For the commaful boat challenge! Hope its good)
looking for feedback on my first poem. It is a bit all over the place but I do appreciate criticism!
I remember the day our cat died I went to my friends
It's been 3 years now, since it happened. 4 years since you came into my life, 3 since you brought in a surprise nobody expected. I remember your gentle touch, your goofy smile, how you always made su...
I remember when we were kids Playing by the trash cans
I tried, so I really hope you enjoyed this! I know the killers POV isn't good but.. oh well!
2.1 Happy Birthday to Yukimura! Remember, I love you ALL my faithful Yams!
-Tsukkisaurus๐ฆ๐
Okay so this is my first one of my first poems ever so I apologise before hand if itโs not up to par, but I enjoyed it.
Lea met Chris on a party. If you want to call it that. To be honest, it was just a barbecue with a couple of friends. Chris lived next door and came over.
The sky is a cold gray. I couldnโt see a tiny piece of the blue sky I used to love so much.
The genie exited the lamp,
waving his arms about.
As the boat sailed far across the ocean Leaving back a lifeless trail
(For the commaful boat challenge! Hope its good)
looking for feedback on my first poem. It is a bit all over the place but I do appreciate criticism!
I remember the day our cat died I went to my friends
It's been 3 years now, since it happened. 4 years since you came into my life, 3 since you brought in a surprise nobody expected. I remember your gentle touch, your goofy smile, how you always made su...
I remember when we were kids Playing by the trash cans