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Looking For Feedback Short Stories

Here are the top Looking For Feedback short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "horror", "thriller", and more.
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The Woman Pilot In Vietnam
notanoob
3 years ago
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1970- Ubon Royal Thai Air Force Base (The Vietnam war), We are in a dark room, with a projector showing a map of Vietnam. "You're gonna be flying an F-4 Phantom to drop bombs on a Vietcong naval base ...

Pilots Point, Bristol Bay,...
davidadams
4 years ago
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Waves thundered onto the wide flat beach. The snaking sand blew toward the dune grass violently dancing on the shore. After being pinned down in camp for two days, they took advantage of a break in th...

To Save Us All
charismafaeri
3 years ago
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This is part one of a two part short story. Part two is already up. Description: A woman wakes up in a strange place with no memory of how she got there, where this place is, or even her own name. She...

To Save Us All (Part 2)
charismafaeri
3 years ago
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This is part two of a two part short story. A woman wakes up in a strange place with no memory of how she got there, where this place is, or even her own name. She sets out in search of answers, but ...

The Woman Pilot In Vietnam
notanoob
3 years ago
13
0
0
1970- Ubon Royal Thai Air Force Base (The Vietnam war), We are in a dark room, with a projector showing a map of Vietnam. "You're gonna be flying an F-4 Phantom to drop bombs on a Vietcong naval base ...

Pilots Point, Bristol Bay,...
davidadams
4 years ago
3
0
2
Waves thundered onto the wide flat beach. The snaking sand blew toward the dune grass violently dancing on the shore. After being pinned down in camp for two days, they took advantage of a break in th...

To Save Us All
charismafaeri
3 years ago
1
0
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This is part one of a two part short story. Part two is already up. Description: A woman wakes up in a strange place with no memory of how she got there, where this place is, or even her own name. She...

To Save Us All (Part 2)
charismafaeri
3 years ago
0
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This is part two of a two part short story. A woman wakes up in a strange place with no memory of how she got there, where this place is, or even her own name. She sets out in search of answers, but ...