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Lament Short Stories

Here are the top Lament short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "vellichor", "bookshop", and more.
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๐™ฟ๐™ฐ๐™ฟ๐™ด๐š ๐™ธ๐™ฒ๐™ท๐™พ๐š
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
250
1
28
๐•๐ž๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ข๐œ๐ก๐จ๐ซ (n.) The strange wistfulness of used bookshops. ๐™ฐ ๐š‹๐š˜๐š˜๐š”๐šœ๐š‘๐š˜๐š™'๐šœ ๐š•๐š˜๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐š•๐šŠ๐š–๐šŽ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐šŠ ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š›... ๐Ÿฅ‡ 1st place winner of @silver_nebula โ€˜s โ€˜August Poetry Conte...

ThemFundamentals
yoshirakki Bronze Comma
4 years ago
231
4
28
Anyone ever had a stutter? ๐Ÿ˜† My version of a Lament! I know it's late! @commafultips

FLY ME TO THE MOON
medha_gautam Power Reader
4 years ago
209
0
18
Lament of a deer.

๏ผณ๏ฝ—๏ฝ๏ฝŽ ๏ผณ๏ฝ๏ฝŽ๏ฝ‡ -[๐€๐ง ๐„๐ฅ๐ž๐ ๏ฟฝ...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
a year ago
175
0
25
๐“˜๐“ฏ ๐“ท๐“ฒ๐“ฐ๐“ฑ๐“ฝ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ผ๐“ฌ๐“ฎ๐“ท๐“ญ๐“ผ ๐“ฒ๐“ท ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ป ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฏ๐“ฎ, ๐“ฏ๐“ธ๐“ฐ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“ฝ๐“ธ ๐“ผ๐“ฎ๐“ฝ ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ ๐“ฏ๐“ป๐“ฎ๐“ฎ ~@Aamii

Parker : แด€ส€แด‡ สแดแดœ แด€ สŸแดแด…แด‡๊œฑแด›แด€...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
6 months ago
170
1
11
CoMixed from @lostintheblue: https://commaful.com/play/lostintheblue/parker-my-lovepoet-wish-and-request/ Lodestar : A Star that leads or guides, especially in reference to the North Star. ...

W i n d c o a t
natkahdek Gifted Writer
4 years ago
147
1
20
An attempt at a "Lamentation" Check out the new account @Commafultips to learn more about what we are doing to help you create ๐Ÿ‘

๐๐ž๐ญ๐ฐ๐ž๐ž๐ง ๐“๐ก๐ž ๐‘๐š...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
6 months ago
148
0
20
I'm abandoned, uniquely.. ~ @aamii_

A Sad Lament
withinurheart Gifted Writer
2 years ago
84
0
4
The Moon's face is flawed yet it shines

A Bold Lament
thislittlelight Gifted Writer
4 years ago
83
0
7
...when they can't breathe.

Kneel
wearebeloved Gifted Writer
4 years ago
65
0
3
A triple haiku in response to George Floyd

๐“ ๐“œ๐“ธ๐“ฝ๐“ฑ๐“ฎ๐“ปโ€™๐“ผ ๐“›๐“ช๐“ถ๏ฟฝ...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
59
0
9
โ€˜๐•„๐•ช ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ, ๐•š๐•— ๐•ช๐• ๐•ฆ ๐•”๐•’๐•Ÿ ๐•ช๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•™๐•–๐•’๐•ฃ ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•š๐•ค ๐•ง๐• ๐•š๐•”๐•– ๐• ๐•— ๐•ž๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃ, ๐•ก๐•๐•–๐•’๐•ค๐•–, ๐•”๐• ๐•ž๐•– ๐•“๐•’๐•”๐•œ ๐•™๐• ๐•ž๐•– ๐•ค๐• ๐• ๐•Ÿ.โ€™ First piece of the trilogy โ€˜๐”ธ ๐•„๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃ โ€˜ dedic...

๐“ ๐“œ๐“ธ๐“ฝ๐“ฑ๐“ฎ๐“ปโ€™๐“ผ ๐“—๐“ฎ๐“ช๏ฟฝ...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
54
0
8
โ€˜๐•„๐•ช ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ, ๐•š๐•— ๐•ช๐• ๐•ฆ ๐•™๐•’๐•ง๐•– ๐•ช๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•™๐•–๐•’๐•ฃ๐•• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•š๐•ค ๐•ง๐• ๐•š๐•”๐•– ๐• ๐•— ๐•ž๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃโ€” ๐• โ€™ ๐•๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•š๐•ฅ ๐•ค๐• ๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•– ๐•ช๐• ๐•ฆ ๐•“๐•’๐•”๐•œ ๐•™๐• ๐•ž๐•–, ๐•ฅ๐•  ๐•ž๐•–.โ€™ Second piece of the trilogy โ€˜๐”ธ ๏ฟฝ...

[therefrigerator]
tofu_tofu Silver Comma
6 years ago
40
0
11
The fearful lives of food . . . if they were alive. (Somewhat related to Murder me, please.)

b l u e s
vinnie_diaries Silver Comma
a year ago
35
0
2
she was never meant to be an unborn flower...๐Ÿฅ€

๐™ฒ๐™ท๐™ด๐š๐š๐šˆ ๐šƒ๐š๐™ด๐™ด ๐™ฑ๐š...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
27
0
0
โ€œSo cherry be of thy rebirth by me, what thy trespassingโ€™s stolen away.โ€

Lament
robotic_nebula Bronze Comma
6 years ago
25
0
5
And I weep for the world In hopes that - my tears can be rain upon the earth

For Bobby
robot_boy
4 years ago
24
0
3
Backstory: its about my brother that passed away 20 years ago. He died on the same day he was born. Shit luck eh?

dear gods, what have i don...
mcamehome Gifted Writer
5 months ago
22
0
0
sorry for missing last year.

Howl
priyabhow Bronze Comma
7 years ago
21
0
4

Torment Lament
patchworkghost Gifted Writer
a year ago
21
0
8
Crashing back down, every night.

๐™ฟ๐™ฐ๐™ฟ๐™ด๐š ๐™ธ๐™ฒ๐™ท๐™พ๐š
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
250
1
28
๐•๐ž๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ข๐œ๐ก๐จ๐ซ (n.) The strange wistfulness of used bookshops. ๐™ฐ ๐š‹๐š˜๐š˜๐š”๐šœ๐š‘๐š˜๐š™'๐šœ ๐š•๐š˜๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐š•๐šŠ๐š–๐šŽ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐šŠ ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š›... ๐Ÿฅ‡ 1st place winner of @silver_nebula โ€˜s โ€˜August Poetry Conte...

ThemFundamentals
yoshirakki Bronze Comma
4 years ago
231
4
28
Anyone ever had a stutter? ๐Ÿ˜† My version of a Lament! I know it's late! @commafultips

FLY ME TO THE MOON
medha_gautam Power Reader
4 years ago
209
0
18
Lament of a deer.

๏ผณ๏ฝ—๏ฝ๏ฝŽ ๏ผณ๏ฝ๏ฝŽ๏ฝ‡ -[๐€๐ง ๐„๐ฅ๐ž๐ ๏ฟฝ...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
a year ago
175
0
25
๐“˜๐“ฏ ๐“ท๐“ฒ๐“ฐ๐“ฑ๐“ฝ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ผ๐“ฌ๐“ฎ๐“ท๐“ญ๐“ผ ๐“ฒ๐“ท ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ป ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฏ๐“ฎ, ๐“ฏ๐“ธ๐“ฐ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“ฝ๐“ธ ๐“ผ๐“ฎ๐“ฝ ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ ๐“ฏ๐“ป๐“ฎ๐“ฎ ~@Aamii

Parker : แด€ส€แด‡ สแดแดœ แด€ สŸแดแด…แด‡๊œฑแด›แด€...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
6 months ago
170
1
11
CoMixed from @lostintheblue: https://commaful.com/play/lostintheblue/parker-my-lovepoet-wish-and-request/ Lodestar : A Star that leads or guides, especially in reference to the North Star. ...

W i n d c o a t
natkahdek Gifted Writer
4 years ago
147
1
20
An attempt at a "Lamentation" Check out the new account @Commafultips to learn more about what we are doing to help you create ๐Ÿ‘

๐๐ž๐ญ๐ฐ๐ž๐ž๐ง ๐“๐ก๐ž ๐‘๐š...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
6 months ago
148
0
20
I'm abandoned, uniquely.. ~ @aamii_

A Sad Lament
withinurheart Gifted Writer
2 years ago
84
0
4
The Moon's face is flawed yet it shines

A Bold Lament
thislittlelight Gifted Writer
4 years ago
83
0
7
...when they can't breathe.

Kneel
wearebeloved Gifted Writer
4 years ago
65
0
3
A triple haiku in response to George Floyd

๐“ ๐“œ๐“ธ๐“ฝ๐“ฑ๐“ฎ๐“ปโ€™๐“ผ ๐“›๐“ช๐“ถ๏ฟฝ...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
59
0
9
โ€˜๐•„๐•ช ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ, ๐•š๐•— ๐•ช๐• ๐•ฆ ๐•”๐•’๐•Ÿ ๐•ช๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•™๐•–๐•’๐•ฃ ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•š๐•ค ๐•ง๐• ๐•š๐•”๐•– ๐• ๐•— ๐•ž๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃ, ๐•ก๐•๐•–๐•’๐•ค๐•–, ๐•”๐• ๐•ž๐•– ๐•“๐•’๐•”๐•œ ๐•™๐• ๐•ž๐•– ๐•ค๐• ๐• ๐•Ÿ.โ€™ First piece of the trilogy โ€˜๐”ธ ๐•„๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃ โ€˜ dedic...

๐“ ๐“œ๐“ธ๐“ฝ๐“ฑ๐“ฎ๐“ปโ€™๐“ผ ๐“—๐“ฎ๐“ช๏ฟฝ...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
54
0
8
โ€˜๐•„๐•ช ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ, ๐•š๐•— ๐•ช๐• ๐•ฆ ๐•™๐•’๐•ง๐•– ๐•ช๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•™๐•–๐•’๐•ฃ๐•• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•š๐•ค ๐•ง๐• ๐•š๐•”๐•– ๐• ๐•— ๐•ž๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃโ€” ๐• โ€™ ๐•๐•–๐•ฅ ๐•š๐•ฅ ๐•ค๐• ๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐•– ๐•ช๐• ๐•ฆ ๐•“๐•’๐•”๐•œ ๐•™๐• ๐•ž๐•–, ๐•ฅ๐•  ๐•ž๐•–.โ€™ Second piece of the trilogy โ€˜๐”ธ ๏ฟฝ...

[therefrigerator]
tofu_tofu Silver Comma
6 years ago
40
0
11
The fearful lives of food . . . if they were alive. (Somewhat related to Murder me, please.)

b l u e s
vinnie_diaries Silver Comma
a year ago
35
0
2
she was never meant to be an unborn flower...๐Ÿฅ€

๐™ฒ๐™ท๐™ด๐š๐š๐šˆ ๐šƒ๐š๐™ด๐™ด ๐™ฑ๐š...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
27
0
0
โ€œSo cherry be of thy rebirth by me, what thy trespassingโ€™s stolen away.โ€

Lament
robotic_nebula Bronze Comma
6 years ago
25
0
5
And I weep for the world In hopes that - my tears can be rain upon the earth

For Bobby
robot_boy
4 years ago
24
0
3
Backstory: its about my brother that passed away 20 years ago. He died on the same day he was born. Shit luck eh?

dear gods, what have i don...
mcamehome Gifted Writer
5 months ago
22
0
0
sorry for missing last year.

Howl
priyabhow Bronze Comma
7 years ago
21
0
4

Torment Lament
patchworkghost Gifted Writer
a year ago
21
0
8
Crashing back down, every night.