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Immortals Short Stories

Here are the top Immortals short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "stars", "power", and more.
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immortals
soprano Silver Comma
2 years ago
54
0
4
i've been posting so many happy poems! this is very uncharacteristic of me! anyway, i wrote this a while ago and it's dedicated to all of my best friends- from my past, in the moment, and in the futur...

Ask the Titans (1)
useranonymous Gifted Writer
2 years ago
29
1
2
Sorry this was short! Please give me questions... I can’t think of that many!

A Son is Born (Part 1 of 2...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
18
0
1
A new baby arrives in the post apocalyptic world of 2184. One hundred and twenty-two years after The Fall. This is a collaboration with another writer who created the 'Hyle' character.

A Son is Born (part 2 of 2...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
18
0
1
A baby arrives in the post apocalyptic world of 2184. One hundred and twenty-two years after The Fall. This is a collaboration with another writer who created the 'Hyle' character.

Endless journey ch:? pt:?
dr4pos Bronze Comma
2 years ago
15
0
1
A small jump into the future. What happend so far? but first we take a look at how they now live together.

The First Night of Autumn
gemmauny Bronze Comma
5 years ago
14
0
1
An immortal follows her daughter through time.

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
37
0
1
Former Enforcer Sergeant, now Constable, Phineas Sweetly has a chat with Arthur.

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
22
0
1
Further misadventures of the Four Orphans of The Apocalypse. (This one gets icky)

A Christmas Finny (Part 4 ...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
16
0
3
The ghost of Kidsmas presents.

A treasure build to last
dr4pos Bronze Comma
2 years ago
11
0
0
The judges and their biggest celebrated Birthday. The 25th is an important day for them. Its the day they stop aging. and the day they will regain the last missing memories if they're reborn.

A Christmas Finny (Part 2 ...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
16
0
1
The ghost of Kidsmas past?

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
23
0
1
Finny, Casper and Onetooth bounced noisily back through the door just as Tukiko was fretting about adding more water to Maisie's stew. In short order, Tuki learned all about; Killer rabbits that didn'...

One of these days
famouspoems Gifted Writer
3 months ago
17
0
0

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
30
0
1
Kru, Finny's escort from the Diesel Town trip, got the job of driving the three kids back to Hope Springs. Easy job. By the time they got there, however, Casper, the rear seat and quite a lot of Oneto...

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
26
0
1
Stony faced now, Kopkage replied matter-of-factly to the mayor's questioning. "We don't know, the autopsy report hasn't yet been produced."

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
28
0
2
Part 12b. Curse the character limitations!

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
24
0
2
Tukiko checked in on the sleeping Worms before returning to Hope Spring's Clinic. This left Maisie to get on with preparing lunch for not just herself and her patient, but the other three urchins as w...

A Christmas Finny (Part 3 ...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
12
0
2
A small detour to the worst of times for Finny.

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
26
0
1
Sergeant Alana's 'chat' with Evan Stanton.

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
24
0
1
Hyle, my co-writer of this story, found a very important part of the story in her files so I have edited the original parts 12, 13 and 14 to accommodate this. Unfortunately, I have had to split part 1...

immortals
soprano Silver Comma
2 years ago
54
0
4
i've been posting so many happy poems! this is very uncharacteristic of me! anyway, i wrote this a while ago and it's dedicated to all of my best friends- from my past, in the moment, and in the futur...

Ask the Titans (1)
useranonymous Gifted Writer
2 years ago
29
1
2
Sorry this was short! Please give me questions... I can’t think of that many!

A Son is Born (Part 1 of 2...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
18
0
1
A new baby arrives in the post apocalyptic world of 2184. One hundred and twenty-two years after The Fall. This is a collaboration with another writer who created the 'Hyle' character.

A Son is Born (part 2 of 2...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
18
0
1
A baby arrives in the post apocalyptic world of 2184. One hundred and twenty-two years after The Fall. This is a collaboration with another writer who created the 'Hyle' character.

Endless journey ch:? pt:?
dr4pos Bronze Comma
2 years ago
15
0
1
A small jump into the future. What happend so far? but first we take a look at how they now live together.

The First Night of Autumn
gemmauny Bronze Comma
5 years ago
14
0
1
An immortal follows her daughter through time.

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
37
0
1
Former Enforcer Sergeant, now Constable, Phineas Sweetly has a chat with Arthur.

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
22
0
1
Further misadventures of the Four Orphans of The Apocalypse. (This one gets icky)

A Christmas Finny (Part 4 ...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
16
0
3
The ghost of Kidsmas presents.

A treasure build to last
dr4pos Bronze Comma
2 years ago
11
0
0
The judges and their biggest celebrated Birthday. The 25th is an important day for them. Its the day they stop aging. and the day they will regain the last missing memories if they're reborn.

A Christmas Finny (Part 2 ...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
16
0
1
The ghost of Kidsmas past?

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
23
0
1
Finny, Casper and Onetooth bounced noisily back through the door just as Tukiko was fretting about adding more water to Maisie's stew. In short order, Tuki learned all about; Killer rabbits that didn'...

One of these days
famouspoems Gifted Writer
3 months ago
17
0
0

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
30
0
1
Kru, Finny's escort from the Diesel Town trip, got the job of driving the three kids back to Hope Springs. Easy job. By the time they got there, however, Casper, the rear seat and quite a lot of Oneto...

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
26
0
1
Stony faced now, Kopkage replied matter-of-factly to the mayor's questioning. "We don't know, the autopsy report hasn't yet been produced."

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
28
0
2
Part 12b. Curse the character limitations!

Then There Were Three (par...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
24
0
2
Tukiko checked in on the sleeping Worms before returning to Hope Spring's Clinic. This left Maisie to get on with preparing lunch for not just herself and her patient, but the other three urchins as w...

A Christmas Finny (Part 3 ...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
12
0
2
A small detour to the worst of times for Finny.

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
26
0
1
Sergeant Alana's 'chat' with Evan Stanton.

Of Innocence and Guilt (pa...
ferp2 Gifted Writer
a year ago
24
0
1
Hyle, my co-writer of this story, found a very important part of the story in her files so I have edited the original parts 12, 13 and 14 to accommodate this. Unfortunately, I have had to split part 1...