It’s like you’re sitting in an enclosed room, arguing with someone from the outside.
Mariel
@dragonair
Just using writing to combat my demons.
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I know I’ve been gone longer than I said I would. Life happened. I saw that the app grew a lot more since I left haha. So much for Commaful spotlight, am I right? Anyways, this little itty bitty thing...
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This speaks volumes, guys.
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Am I good enough?
I fear that I never am.
May that feeling change.
A song that reminds me of my feelings when writing this was and by EDEN. It’s a short song, but dives into what it feels like to not be good enough for someone else, but also not know how to be that p...
For my babe:
This is what I sent my boyfriend for our anniversary yesterday. Let me know what you think.
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What if I incorporate playlists or songs that go with the stuff I write?
Just saying. Anyways I’m currently writing a short story. I don’t know if you’ll like it. It’s my first fictio- ok my first memoir... is that the right word for it? Just know that you need to read it ...
Is it too much to ask for feedback on my stuff? I’d like to improve, please.
Thanks.
It would mean the world to me!
Fear of Anger
This is the intro of the next piece I’m writing on. Idk why but certain things have been getting me angry (frustrated, hateful, etc.) lately, and I felt like I should be posting about it just to get m...
The blank mind.
It’s a shrewd, foul place.
It’s like you’re alone in a blank canvas,
Wanting to fill the space,
yearning to stamp your existence somewhere.
But nothing pops up. Nothing happens.
You can’t lift your pen to glide across the paper.
Hi guys! So i just keep on writing in my worst of times hehe. I like to call this one “The Dreamer’s Death” for I am currently feeling like I am dying inside, so this this sputtered out of my head. Le...
It’s like walking in a circle,
Never knowing when the end will come.
Or it’s like sitting in pure darkness,
Pondering about what’s in there, too.
It’s to think that you know what’ll happen,
Even when you know it’s not true.
It’s to wait constantly...
Hi uh I wrote this earlier today to try to describe my emotions. I’d like some feedback on how to make it better. I usually write poems, but this came out instead. Thanks!