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Her Crayons

A little girl with something to protect, but she has to live with it now that it's broken... I accept all and any criticism!!

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Don't fret little boy

This is a really really rough draft so please let me know what you think I should change or what you like about it! Let me know if it is confusing as well. My goal for this was for the poem to be abou...

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State of Mind

A poem about the endless train of thoughts that night brings.

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Just a Girl

Don't hold back! Please give constructive criticism, I appreciate it!! This is a poem about how women are treated. I'm not sure if this is the title I will keep so if you have suggestions feel free to...

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Help

Short poem about someone being lost. Please leave advice and feedback!!

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Identity

A poem about depression. Please leave feedback!!

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My message for you

A short poem about a one sided connection. Constructive criticism is welcomed!!

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