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As touching a poem can get.

Remembering

The old man stared out the window of the airport. Remembering...

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Poetry.

the prison cell

It is possible... It is possible at least sometimes...

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White Once More

Jealousy. A self destruction. The flower which failed to realize her own angelic white beauty and envied the ones pigmented. The envy grows till is burns and rots her. At her end she realizes, she was...

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Hey all make sure you give this touching, sweet piece of work a read.

THE WEEPING WILLOW TREE

They found the owl…this morning…”Look!” the young boy said. On the street in front of their house…a little owl was dead.

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Camphor (Her Strong Aroma)

{info: chenin blanc is white wine} A note on a man who is left reminiscing his late wife by the tree she planted and memories of her that live strong. I chose Camphor tree as its scent and ability to ...

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Birthday Bang

See what I did there?

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Beyond the Bedroom Door

Trying out some rhymes lately. (((I deleted one of my poems on mistake LOVE THAT FOR ME HAHA)))

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THEY ASKED THEIR GOD...

They asked their God: “Why is there poverty, famine and injustice in the world?

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Truly Fantasia

Inspired by my mother.

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A sweet rhyme. Give it a read

DO TREES ENJOY THE SUNSET?

As we walked along a wooded path beside the river’s edge enjoying the evening breeze

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